The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the results of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same to periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides data on the number of
people
who visited the Ashdown Museum
in two different years, before and after it was renewed. The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of people
's satisfaction from their visit of
the Change preposition
to
museum
before and after it was refurbished.
It is clear that
the number of visitors
increased significantly after the refurbishment. 74 thousand visited the museum
during the first year and the figure grew almost by 1,3 per cent
after the museum
was refurbished.
Probing further
, the percentage of dissatisfied visitors
plummeted from two-fifth of the total in the first year to 15 per cent
the year after. There was an increase of satisfied and very satisfied people
, who was in the museum
after its refurbishment. Both figures surged from 30 and 15 per cent
to 40 per cent
and more than a third respectively. It is remarkable that the proportion of very dissatisfied visitors
halved (from one-tenth to 5 per cent
).
Overall
, the refurbishment of the Ashdown Museum
was quite successful and helped to improve the level of satisfaction of its visitors
and the total number of people
who prefer to spend their time in the museum
.Submitted by mgshetler on
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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