The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.
The chart illustrates components of GDP from
IT
and Service Industry in the UK from Correct article usage
the IT
two
different years
. There are five years
differences 1992, 1994, 1996,1998, and 1998.
IT industry from 1992 to 1994 increased from 6.5% to 8.3% . Two
years
later, In 1996, the number
decreased became 7.9%. In the last
two
years
, from 1996 to 2000 the number
increased from 12% to 15%.
Gross Domestic Product from Service Industry from 1992 to 2000 experienced some increase. In 1992 it started from 4% and became 6.3% in 1994, two
years
later in 1996 the number
increased to 6.5%, next in 1998 it became 7.8 % and for the last
year of counting in 2000, it became 15%.
Overall
, Gross Domestic Product from IT increased from 1992 to 1994, and it decreased in 1996, but two
years
later, the number
increased. The number
of Service Industries increased from 1992 to 2000.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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