In
this
contemporary epoch,a greater section of society suffering from obesity.
Therefore
,they are more prone to have co-morbidities
such
as
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diabetes,high blood pressure and thyroid.
Consequently
,
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deal of doctors
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occupied to treat
people.
However
,
majorityCorrect article usage
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of inhabitants
opinesCorrect subject-verb agreement
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that to curb
this
health hazard ,
governmentAdd an article
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must add a
sports
subject in school.
Thus
,
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become aware
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aboutChange the preposition
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their health
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young age .I partially agree
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the given notion .
This
essay will
further
elaborate my view with relatable examples.
To begin
children
are like
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raw clay, parents and leaders can
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them in their desired steps.
Firstly
,
inChange preposition
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young age
children
are more curious to explore exotic food in their snacks and diet.
Additionally
,they are physically more active in their teenage,as they do not have any responsibilities of family and finance.
Hence
,
educationAdd an article
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system can easily make
children
aware
aboutChange preposition
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importanceAdd an article
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of physical fitness and
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by engaging
themselvesCorrect pronoun usage
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in outdoor
sports
. To cite an example, school management should give instructions to
sports
teachers to add extra curriculum activities
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their academic schedule.
Such
as
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swimming, cricket,
volleyballCorrect word choice
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. By playing
sports
,
children
not only gain strength but
also
they Correct pronoun usage
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improve their results in studies notably,as their concentration increases.
On the contrary
, in
this
fast- pacedCorrect your spelling
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life ,both parents have to work to meet
their Correct pronoun usage
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both ends.
As a result
,
majorityCorrect article usage
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peopleChange preposition
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lead
sedentaryAdd an article
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lifestyleFix the agreement mistake
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. Henceforth,lack of
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and
nutritionReplace the word
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rich food they usually can not make it at home because they are sort on time and
this
is
primeAdd an article
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cause of weight gain .
Nevertheless
,
besides
physical
,
healthyCorrect article usage
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diet plays a vital role
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cop -
weightChange preposition
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gain
issueFix the agreement mistake
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.
Subsequently
,
councilAdd an article
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must organise some free
Nutrition seminar.
forCorrect your spelling
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example, every fifteen days school management should organise
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eat - fitCorrect your spelling
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" seminar,in which
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dieticianFix the agreement mistake
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suggest what parents can give to their
children
in
mid morningAdd a hyphen
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and evening snacks.
Moreover
,make them aware
aboutChange preposition
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macro and
micro nutrientsCorrect your spelling
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.
To conclude
,it is
undeniableAdd an article
the undeniable
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conviction that
will keep a person physically
as well as
mentally fit.
Nonetheless
, they must have a look
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their regular diet to stay away from
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on extra
.