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Because of the rising cost of housing, many young people are increasingly being forced to live with their parents into their 30s . Are there more advantages or disadvantages to this trend?

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Most young aged into their 30s pushing them to become dependent on their
parents
 of the rising value of housing.
This
 current situation is more drawbacks to the young community and especially to their
parents
. At
this
 time, some of the youth are more reliant on their
parents
 and not capable to live on their own.
As a result
, they are not developing skills when it comes to interaction but
also
 solving a problem in their own way.
Furthermore
, guardians are the one who suffers from
this
 action and one of the reasons why their children are still depending on them.
In addition
, we all know in our world is expensive to buy which leads to many people deciding to stay with their
parents
 for free accommodation, food,
also
 other things they need.
However
, if
still
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this
 routine maintains sooner or later their own or future children will depend on them as a cycle and cause our society a big problem.
In contrast
, some of them are not working and chose to stay at home all the time especially, to other people with
a neurological problems
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 they need much more attention and interaction with other people which will give them a chance to improve their intellectual side.
To conclude
, living in our parent's home is not a problem.
Nevertheless
, we need to know the limitations
as well as
 the need to move on our own to have a good purpose in our life even to our
parents
. Let's help and give them what they deserve.
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