Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar; which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
Most diseases are closely related to how the patients eat. Being addicted to
sugar
is deemed a contributing factor to obesity. It is claimed that putting a higher Use synonyms
sugar
tax is an effective way to fight against it. Use synonyms
However
, in the following essay, I would elaborate on the reason why I disagree with Linking Words
this
way of reducing carbohydrates.
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To begin
with, it can cause serious fluctuations in food prices. Raising the price of Linking Words
sugar
can impact many relevant products Use synonyms
such
as cakes or beverages because it is a fundamental substance to many foods. Linking Words
For instance
, many food stands in Taiwan provide their customers with drinks as a side dish, if the price is raised, they must Linking Words
also
lift the price of every meal to sustain the service.
Another reason that reducing carbohydrate consumption by tax can be detrimental is its ineffectiveness. Though Linking Words
sugar
can be one of the factors that lead to unhealthy body shapes, excessive consumption of oil or salt can Use synonyms
also
lead to health issues. Linking Words
For example
, some diets might ask people to consume more oily foods Linking Words
instead
of sugary ones, claiming that Linking Words
this
can help with lowering blood Linking Words
sugar
. Use synonyms
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, though blood Linking Words
sugar
can be reduced to some degree, the patients may still suffer from obesity Use synonyms
due to
imbalanced diets. Linking Words
In other words
, Reducing sweet foods is not the only key to resolving health problems.
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although
consuming too many sweets can be the major factor that causes obesity, the way of raising Linking Words
sugar
prices is far more impractical and might lead to a severe impact on food prices as a whole.Use synonyms
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