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Science is very important in the 21st century. How do you think it could be made more appealing to young people?

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Science
 is a major factor of influence in our everyday
lifes
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, from home
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 to school and various offices. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will elaborate on ways that it can be made more attractive to the youth. First and foremost,
science
 can be incorporated
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 cartoons and other
learning based
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learning-based
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 programs organized for toddlers and children. In
this
 respect, they tend to develop
the
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 love for
science
 as they mature.
For instance
, a television program organized by the Ghana education service, on how to read and pronounce words has been beneficial since most of
these
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 youngsters who watch these programs are fluent in reading.
However
,
this
 same method can be applied to
science
, to
held
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help
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 children develop
interest
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 in it.
Furthermore
, introducing competitions with great
reward
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 and scholarships on
science
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will appeal
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 youth to study more
science related
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 courses. In
this
 view, when these competitions are held right from the basic level of education to college and the notice participants are being rewarded, they would be attracted to it and
hence
joining
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 the
science
 class and
taking
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 them
serious
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. In conclusion, inspire
of
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 the fact that
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 not all young people have
the
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 interest in
science
 but other aspects. I stand by the view that
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 incorporating
science
 into television programs for children and organizing
science
 competitions with attractive rewards, will make it more appealing for the younger generation.
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