The only way to improve safety on our roads is to give much stricter punishments for driving offences. What extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent days, the
Government
set new rules to avoid
road
accidents
. Some people believe stricter punishments for driver offences are the only
way
to improve
road
safety
. I completely disagree with
this
statement. stricter punishment may reduce
road
accidents
but it's not the only
way
. In
this
essay, I will discuss how other effective ways like good infrastructure, regular
vehicle
maintenance and awareness improve
road
safety
.
Firstly
, Good roads might avoid
road
accidents
. If the
government
provides infrastructure like good roads, traffic lights, and speed breakers in right place, there is a high chance to avoid
road
accidents
.
For instance
,
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UK authority well maintains their roads which reduce 20% of
road
accidents
every year.
Likewise
, regular
vehicle
maintenance helps to avoid
road
accidents
. a person who drives a
vehicle
in the bad condition
face
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faces
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difficulties during driving which may lead to severe
accidents
. The
government
set regulations to check the
vehicle
condition every year might avoid
this
kind of
accidents
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accident
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.
For example
, In India authorities should check the
vehicle
condition every year and provide an FC certificate, a person who drives a
vehicle
without an FC certificate should be punished.
Furthermore
, the Administration set an awareness campaign about
road
accident
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accidents
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for
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so
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people
may
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that may
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give more responsibility
to
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societies
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. communities had a lack of awareness about
road
safety
.
Government
should advertise the importance of wearing helmets
as well as
a seat belts
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a seat belt
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to the people.
For example
, In 2016, Bajaj company set
a
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up a
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campaign and they told how many bikers are dead on highways because of not following the
road
rules. In conclusion, punishment for
the
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apply
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driving offence is one of the
way
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ways
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to improve
road
safety
but it's not the only
way
. Authorities
also
take responsibility to improve
road
safety
.
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