Your friend has a travel company and would like you to come and work with him. Write a letter replying to your friends offer. In your letter: explain what you know about your friends company choose whether you accept or decline the offer give reasons for your choice

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Dear Sham, Great to hear from you. glad to know everything going well for you. I would like to thank you for the job offer, and happy to hear that you have started a new branch in Paris. I have recently read some good reviews
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Trip Advisor about your travel firm, especially your European tour package. I came to know it is one of the most preferred tour packages for young travellers. I am sorry to say I cannot accept your offer at
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project manager
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for two years and it will be important for my career. I have shifted my home to Amsterdam. You should visit my new home with Anna and your kids. I will share the address on WhatsApp. Don't worry about the accommodation, a spare room is available in my home. Let me know your plan. Best wishes, Jennifer
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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