The pie chart shows the main reason why agricultural land becomes less productive.

The pie chart shows the main reason why agricultural land becomes less productive.
The pie chart illustrates the principal reason and causes why the agricultural field becomes less fruitful in three regions of the world during 1990 .
Overall
,
deforestation
and
over-cultivation
were the highest ,followed by over-grazing and others. Europe experienced the most significant increase .
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North America's percentages were the lowest among the three regions during
this
year. On average, Europe in approximately 23% of land degradation with around 9%
deforestation
, 7%
over-cultivation
and 7% over-grazing.After that ,Oceania in practically 13% of land deterioration with nearly 2%
deforestation
and 11% over-grazing and lately, North America with a proportion of 5% land degradation with about 2%
deforestation
,3%
over-cultivation
and
finally
1% over-grazing. In
this
figure, the rate of territory deterioration worldwide has reached a maximum of 35% in over-grazing ,
then
followed by a considerable rate of 30% in both
deforestation
and
over-cultivation
.
Therefore
, the rate with a minimum of only 7% is another cause of worldwide area degeneration.

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