The pie chart shows the main reason why agricultural land becomes less productive.

The pie chart shows the main reason why agricultural land becomes less productive.
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The pic chart below shows information about the main reasons agriculture becomes less productive.
In addition
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, the table chart below gives data on how
causes
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of
land
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degradation
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by regions of the world during the 1990s.
Overall
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,it can be seen how three
causes
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of
land
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degradation
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around the world are deforestation, over-cultivation ,over-grazing , and others. And the table provides
causes
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of
land
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degradation
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by region namely, North America, Europe and Oceania.
Firstly
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, the highest percentage of
causes
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of
land
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degradation
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in many nations was over-grazing at 35 per
cent
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. Followed by deforestation was 30 per
cent
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and over-cultivation was 28 per
cent
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respectively. And the lowest was other at 7 %.
Secondly
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, the table shows that Europe was the highest 23 per
cent
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of
land
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degradation
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.
In contrast
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, the lowest region in which
land
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degradation
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was North America.
Moreover
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, Oceania was O % in over-grazing. In Europe was 23 per
cent
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words causes, land, degradation, cent with synonyms.
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