Many people believe that bicycle is a healthy and environmentally friendly mode of transport. However, it is no longer the main form of transport. What are the reasons? What could be done to encourage the use of bicycles among the wider population?
Nowadays, more and more
people
commute by Use synonyms
vehicles
Fix the agreement mistake
vehicle
instead
of riding Linking Words
bicycles
or metros, Use synonyms
it
rise a wide concern that some Correct pronoun usage
which
people
claim the bicycle is more beneficial to our environment.I completely agree with Use synonyms
this
view and Linking Words
i
will give the Change the capitalization
I
proves
to support my perspective in the following sentence.
First of all,as technology developed fast in our society, the materials Replace the word
proof
of
our lives are increasing higher and higher. Change preposition
in
Thus
our Linking Words
form
of transport Fix the agreement mistake
forms
become
more and more Change the verb form
becomes
various
, Replace the word
varied
such
as Linking Words
Add an article
a vehicle
vehicle
,Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
subway
,Fix the agreement mistake
subways
railway
,and Fix the agreement mistake
railways
airplane
.Another aspect, in order to save time and adjust to the fast pace of life,Fix the agreement mistake
airplanes
people
need more efficient transportation.Use synonyms
For example
, Linking Words
you
only spent 15 minutes Correct word choice
if you
by
driving Change preposition
apply
while
Linking Words
have
to take more than half an hour Wrong verb form
having
by
riding Change preposition
apply
Use synonyms
bicycles
,Fix the agreement mistake
bicycle
then
you could save time to do something more important things.Linking Words
Consequently
, Linking Words
bicycle
are gradually replaced by other Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
transports
.
Fix the agreement mistake
transport
However
, Linking Words
as
the Change preposition
with
increasing
of using vehicles,Replace the word
increase
the
pollution issues Correct article usage
apply
gives
rise to detrimental to Correct subject-verb agreement
give
environment
.Add an article
the environment
For instance
,Linking Words
the
global warming Correct article usage
apply
Linking Words
due
to the emission of carbon dioxide Add a missing verb
is due
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
released
Add a missing verb
is released
from
driving a car.Change preposition
by
Therefore
,we need to reduce using cars to prevent pollution by taking some initiatives.On the one hand, the government should enforce a law that Linking Words
indicate
a ban on using vehicles.To elaborate,the policy of traffic restriction by Change the verb form
indicates
control
the number of cars on Correct subject-verb agreement
controls
the
commute times,and encourage Correct article usage
apply
people
Use synonyms
take
public Add the particle
to take
transports
.Fix the agreement mistake
transport
On the other hand
,Linking Words
the
individuals should have the consciousness to take Correct article usage
apply
the
responsibility Correct article usage
apply
of
using Change preposition
for
bicycles
when there is no necessary for cars.
In conclusion,Use synonyms
although
Linking Words
bicycles
are not the Use synonyms
mainly
transport in modern days anymore, there are Change the adverb
main
significantly
values Change the adverb
significant
of
using Change preposition
in
it
. The efforts of neither government nor individuals can be overlooked in order to create and Correct pronoun usage
them
combinated
impact on our environmental preservation.Correct your spelling
combined
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