Many people believe that bicycle is a healthy and environmentally friendly mode of transport. However, it is no longer the main form of transport. What are the reasons? What could be done to encourage the use of bicycles among the wider population?

Nowadays, more and more

people

commute by

vehicles

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instead

of riding

bicycles

or metros,

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rise a wide concern that some

people

claim the bicycle is more beneficial to our environment.I completely agree with

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view and

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will give the

proves

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to support my perspective in the following sentence. First of all,as technology developed fast in our society, the materials

of

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our lives are increasing higher and higher.

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our

form

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of transport

become

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more and more

various

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,

such

as

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a vehicle

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vehicle

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,

subway

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,

railway

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,and

airplane

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.Another aspect, in order to save time and adjust to the fast pace of life,

people

need more efficient transportation.

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,

you

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only spent 15 minutes

by

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driving

while

have

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to take more than half an hour

by

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riding

bicycles

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,

then

you could save time to do something more important things.

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,

bicycle

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bicycles

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are gradually replaced by other

transports

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.

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,

as

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the

increasing

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of using vehicles,

the

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pollution issues

gives

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rise to detrimental to

environment

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the environment

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.

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,

the

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global warming

due

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to the emission of carbon dioxide

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released

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from

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driving a car.

Therefore

,we need to reduce using cars to prevent pollution by taking some initiatives.On the one hand, the government should enforce a law that

indicate

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a ban on using vehicles.To elaborate,the policy of traffic restriction by

control

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the number of cars on

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commute times,and encourage

people

take

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public

transports

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.

On the other hand

,

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individuals should have the consciousness to take

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responsibility

of

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using

bicycles

when there is no necessary for cars. In conclusion,

although

bicycles

are not the

mainly

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transport in modern days anymore, there are

significantly

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values

of

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using

it

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. The efforts of neither government nor individuals can be overlooked in order to create and

combinated

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combined

impact on our environmental preservation.