The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reason why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.
The pie
chart
displays the reason why adults decide to study, while
the line graph illustrates how the tuition fee for each course should be funded.
Overall
, the figure of the bar chart
shows that the most reason for education is interest in the subject. On the other hand
, it can be observed from the pie chart
that individual funding has the highest proportion than the other two.
To begin
, most elderly decide to achieve advanced academics because they are keen on subjects, accounting for 40%. Moreover
, the reason why is to gain qualification makeup 385. The lowest figure of the survey is 9% which represent
that adults want to meet people.
On the one hand, the pie Correct subject-verb agreement
represents
chart
gives information about the figure for 40% of which people think the cost should be funded individually. However
, 35% of employers can pay the tuition fee while
the lowest per cent is 25% which shows that the cost must be paid by taxpayers.Submitted by dangtranquoctrung01 on
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