The pie charts below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets
The pie charts illustrate information on the
proportion
of carbohydrates, protein and fat in Use synonyms
three
different diets. There are Use synonyms
three
kinds of diets, namely Average Use synonyms
diet
, Healthy Use synonyms
diet
, and healthy Use synonyms
diet
for sport.
The Use synonyms
proportion
of carbohydrates in the Use synonyms
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types of Use synonyms
diet
is different. The average Use synonyms
diet
needs 40% which is lower than the healthy Use synonyms
diet
with a Use synonyms
proportion
of 50% and the healthy Use synonyms
diet
for sport needs more than the two other diets, which are 60%.
The need for protein on Use synonyms
average
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an average
the average
diet
is 40% which is the largest than the others. A healthy Use synonyms
diet
needs 30% and Use synonyms
healthy
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a healthy
diet
for sports is the lowest with 25% from 100%.
Fat Use synonyms
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is the lowest of the Use synonyms
three
kinds of Use synonyms
diet
. Average Use synonyms
diet
and healthy Use synonyms
diet
need 20%. A healthy Use synonyms
diet
for sport just needs 15%.
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Overall
, a Healthy Linking Words
diet
for sports needs the most Carbohydrates. The need for fat is the lowest of the Use synonyms
three
kinds of Use synonyms
diet
. Protein is needed more for the average Use synonyms
diet
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