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Some people believe that professionals such as doctor and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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 in the past few decades migration of professionals
such
 as doctor and lawyers are noticed a group of some people agree with
this
 view because they believe in
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 that but, others argue it will On their current
country
. Several reasons support
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the
work
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. Into ,that all most important one is the forcefully or without any emotion in the workplace. It means
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 if a person
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 not want to do
work
 and wants to go
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 place for
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 that time they cannot do any productive
work
 for their company or firm because they desire another job and their feelings are attached
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.
Similarly
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 different
type
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 of job professionals are lived. Many
does
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 not have sustainable wealth or health in
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 trained place show for their personal development perspective they move to another city or
country
. People think
propersonals
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pro personals
 are already set in their life and they achieved all their
desirations
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decorations
destinations
descriptions
 but it was not always true, if they move developed
country
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 in their health
wealth
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as well as
 their family members.
However
,
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doesn't
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it
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normal because they believe in their own national development
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 if a person stayed in
same
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country
 where they tough professional
work
 it will
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 in their main factors of the nation.
Which
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 are economy social responsibility awareness in
locality
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 and
last
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 important cause is education system improvement by increasing in literacy rates of
nation
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the nation
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 it could mostly possible if
professional
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 do not leave their
trained
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 place. In conclusion, for the growth of
nation
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 professionals should stay or they can move for their personal growth or
good
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 environment people do not need to enforce for working and after
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 they are
well knowledged
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 person
thus
 they can take their own decisions.
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