Some people believe that professionals such as doctor and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
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such
as doctor and lawyers are noticed a group of some people agree with this
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country
.
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work
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professionals
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do
not want to do Change the verb form
does
work
and wants to go another
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to another
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a job
the job
work
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.
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there
Similarly
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,globe
type
of job professionals are lived. Many Fix the agreement mistake
types
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not have sustainable wealth or health in Change the verb form
do
there
trained place show for their personal development perspective they move to another city or Correct your spelling
their
country
. People think propersonals
are already set in their life and they achieved all their Correct your spelling
pro personals
desirations
but it was not always true, if they move developed Correct your spelling
decorations
destinations
descriptions
country
it might be possible to growth
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grow
wealth
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and wealth
as well as
their family members.
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counterclaims
doesn't
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don't
it
normal because they believe in their own national developmentCorrect pronoun usage
apply
,
if a person stayed in Remove the comma
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same
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the same
country
where they tough professional work
it will helpful
in their main factors of the nation. Replace the word
help
Which
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locality
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the locality
last
important cause is education system improvement by increasing in literacy rates of Correct article usage
the last
nation
it could mostly possible if Add an article
the nation
a nation
professional
do not leave their Fix the agreement mistake
professionals
trained
place.
In conclusion, for the growth of Replace the word
training
nation
professionals should stay or they can move for their personal growth or Correct article usage
the nation
good
environment people do not need to enforce for working and after Correct article usage
a good
all
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,all
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person Add a hyphen
well-knowledged
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