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It has been noted that many people who had a big impact on the world gave themselves completely to their work and did not bother with the idea of “work-life balance”. To what extent should people try to have a good work-life balance?

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Many
people
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 who had a significant impact on the world did not bother with the idea of "
work
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-
life
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 balance, and they gave themselves completely to their
work
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. Given that,
people
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 should have a good
work
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-
life
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 balance so as not to be completely absorbed by
work
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 and to enjoy other
aspects
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 of
life
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.
First,
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people
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 should not be entirely into
work
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 because it does not let them have personal
life
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 and
time
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 for themselves.
Work
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 plays an important role in everyone's
life
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, given that
work
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 is needed to afford the cost of living. Yet, if
people
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 dedicate all their
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 to
work
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, they will not have
time
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 to dedicate to hobbies or self-development,
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 as to connect with themselves or practise their favourite activities.
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, if
one
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 just has
time
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 for
work
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, he or she will not be able to practise sports, discover new places, or meditate, among other examples. From my own experience, whenever I needed extra payment and did overtime, I could not spend
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 on my hobbies,
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 as cooking or cycling.
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,
people
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 should enjoy other
aspects
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 of
life
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such
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 as family or
friends
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. Spending
time
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 with
friends
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 beneficiates psychological health as
one
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 is surrounded by loved ones, so it is vital to spend
time
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 with
friends
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. Family is as well another essential pillar of our daily
life
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.
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 to
friends
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, they play an important role in our psychological health.
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, if
one
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 works a lot,
then
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one
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 is not able to dedicate
time
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 to
friends
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 or family.
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, as mentioned before, if
one
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 is completely given to
work
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, he or she is not able to attend
other
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aspects
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such
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 as family or
friends
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. In conclusion, there should be a
work
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-
life
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 balance to cover all
aspects
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 of
one
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's
life
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 so as not to be completely absorbed by
work
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 and to enjoy other
aspects
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 of
life
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Well-being
  • Productivity
  • Fulfilling
  • Time management
  • Prioritize
  • Burnout
  • Boundaries
  • Dedication
  • Personal fulfillment
  • Efficiency
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