It has been noted that many people who had a big impact on the world gave themselves completely to their work and did not bother with the idea of “work-life balance”. To what extent should people try to have a good work-life balance?
Many
people
who had a significant impact on the world did not bother with the idea of "work
-life
balance, and they gave themselves completely to their work
. Given that, people
should have a good work
-life
balance so as not to be completely absorbed by work
and to enjoy other aspects
of life
.
First,
people
should not be entirely into work
because it does not let them have personal life
and time
for themselves. Work
plays an important role in everyone's life
, given that work
is needed to afford the cost of living. Yet, if people
dedicate all their time
to work
, they will not have time
to dedicate to hobbies or self-development, such
as to connect with themselves or practise their favourite activities. For example
, if one
just has time
for work
, he or she will not be able to practise sports, discover new places, or meditate, among other examples. From my own experience, whenever I needed extra payment and did overtime, I could not spend time
on my hobbies, such
as cooking or cycling.
Secondly
, people
should enjoy other aspects
of life
such
as family or friends
. Spending time
with friends
beneficiates psychological health as one
is surrounded by loved ones, so it is vital to spend time
with friends
. Family is as well another essential pillar of our daily life
. Similarly
to friends
, they play an important role in our psychological health. Nevertheless
, if one
works a lot, then
one
is not able to dedicate time
to friends
or family. For example
, as mentioned before, if one
is completely given to work
, he or she is not able to attend other
Change preposition
to other
aspects
such
as family or friends
.
In conclusion, there should be a work
-life
balance to cover all aspects
of one
's life
so as not to be completely absorbed by work
and to enjoy other aspects
of life
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