In today’s society, both Western medicine and traditional, complementary forms of medicines are now widely known and used. The effectiveness oft kinds of treatment is determined by the patient's mental attitude towards it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, people are aware of both Ayurvedic and modern

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so, many doctors suggest matching

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which is suitable for patients.

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noted that without patient self-awareness it is not helpful.I totally agree with

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statement and I will justify my stand in upcoming paragraphs.

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, it is the adage "Where is will there is the way"

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means without self-consciousness nothing will not help.The same thing applies to treatment.To elaborate ,

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technological ,advancement it is possible to cure some uncurable diseases.Apart from that,new inventions and specific studies regarding the human body will open doors for many new aspects of life , these things only helpful when people are want to apply them in their life at all costs.

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last

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year one of the patients from the USA recovered from cancer which was uncurable by doctors' options.When the media have taken interviews

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they found out that not only

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but patients' mental stability toward the whole journey play a vital role.

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, for any chemical and homoeopathic-based treatment work on the physical ,level there are not any inventions yet discovered that directly impact on a mental level.To explain it

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, individuals have the freedom of what they want to do with their life so it is their responsibility to take care of their health and mind not one can able to help in

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scenario.

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, there are many incidents noticed throughout history where many people overcome their physical disability through their strong devotion.

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, doctors only capable to guide the patient on what is right but following that path is totally

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on the individual. In conclusion, discussing all the facts about

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topic I completely agree with the notion that

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only helps to a certain extent but personal willpower plays a supportive role in fights against illness.

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In today’s society, both Western medicine and traditional, complementary forms of medicines are now widely known and used. The effectiveness oft kinds of treatment is determined by the patient's mental attitude towards it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and dive your own opinion.

some people think governments should spend money on measures to save language with few speakers from dying out completely. others think this is a waste of financial resources. discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many factory foods and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.

Environmental problems are too great to be managed by individuals. Real change can only be made at the government level. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that music is a good way of ringing people of different cultures and ages together to extent do you agree or disagree with this opionion.