After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with his/her family. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mr Broadhurst, I hope

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letter meet you well. My name is Anne Lee, the lady you helped at lace market junction during the accident with the tramp on Thursday, 6th April 2023. I got your home address from the business card you gave my husband. I write to express my gratitude and appreciate your very kind gesture and the help you rendered at the scene of the accident.

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, I am very grateful for the effort you took to follow me to the clinic and went out of your way to buy me food and the prescribed drugs before my husband came by. I was so surprised because we bearly even knew each other but you still helped me. Thank you so much.

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, my family and I will like to invite you and your family over to our home for a visit and Easter celebration. We would really love to have you and your family around. In conclusion, I cannot thank you enough for saving my life. Indeed there are still good samaritans. I look forward to having you. Yours Faithfully, Anne Lee.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

187 words

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