Some people think that theoretical subjects should be removed from universities. Do you agree with this opinion?

All
subjects
which exist in universities are supposed to be beneficial in all aspects of
student's
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life. Since practical
lessons
are more enticing and tempting than
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theoretical
ones, some people claim that
students
should be exempt from them. I partially agree with
this
opinion and clarify some ideas which underpin my view. It is said that today in many universities
students
are attracted by practical
lessons
such
as computer programming or accounting,
while
curriculums like physics and literature appear to be mundane and
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occasionally
challenging. And practical
lessons
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to be not only
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to socialize and exchange experiences
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but
also
advantageous to find
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a better
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job
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, as many
students
are demanded to brush up more on practical
lessons
for the sake of their future
career
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.
Moreover
, some
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theoretical
lessons
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to be completely useless and extremely
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, so it would be better if the number of
subjects
like that diminished.
Therefore
, these are the reasons why loads of people thrive on practical
lessons
.
Nonetheless
,
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of
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theoretical
subjects
compensate for
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of practical ones depending on
dedication
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the dedication
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of time, effort and interest.
Due to
the fact that numerous inventions are attributed to
theory
and almost all breakthroughs in physics and science started as a
theory
at first. Einstein's
theory
of relativity or
theory
of oxygen and flight are
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in point. What is more, as it is obvious, nowadays some youth are busy with working on projects like creating robots,
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due to
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an adequate
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source of knowledge.
This
in turn means that physics, science or psychology will be one of the most essential
subjects
even in the future.
To conclude
, today practical curriculums are in trend among
the
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students
, meaning that they are intensive and
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attractive
subjects
,
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they can not outclass the importance of impractical
lessons
. So university
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should be moderate in teaching both of these
subjects
.
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