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Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens any more satisfied. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There are those who argue that when a
nation
 is already rich, any additional growth in its
economy
 will not make its citizens more gratified.
However
. I completely do not coincide with the same view.
To begin
 with, the
nation
's economic growth will open a vast of
work
opportunities
 to
people
 in the working community as it attracts more local and foreign investors.
For instance
, a famous shoe company will open a branch in a particular
country
.
Therefore
, it needs high numbers of employees to fill vacant and available job positions.
Consequently
, more
people
 will get more chances and
opportunities
 to be employed and some might even get promoted.
Hence
, more job
opportunities
 mean more satisfaction for the citizen of a
country
.
In addition
, by having growth in the
economy
,
people
 in the community will push themselves more to
work
 together. As they can see the positive outcome of their camaraderie with each other. Study shows that if residents in a community or
country
 are harmoniously working together, not only do they get a sense of companionship but
also
 a more harmonious relationship.
Hence
, they feel more gratified and more encouraged to
work
 with each other. Since they not only get personal benefits out of it but
as well as
 they can help their
economy
 to grow.
To conclude
, a
country
's growing
economy
 may pose great
work
opportunities
 and job vacancies within a
nation
. As local and foreign investors will be enticed to open a branch of their product in a certain
country
. On top of that, it can be a ladder to success for the residents as well. As they can be promoted to
a higher positions
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a higher position
higher positions
show examples
.
Furthermore
, there are studies that showed that
people
 in a
nation
 can be stirred up more to form a harmonious relationship with each other as they can see the great benefit of it.
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