Nowadays, many animal species are becoming extinct. Some people believe that countries and individuals must solve this problem, others believe that human beings are more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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charge has attracted numerous controversies and drawn the attention of the public. Some

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hold the view that charging

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for a museum is a better idea,

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others think it has more disadvantages. In my eyes, its advantages are more than disadvantages because of the cultural and financial reasons.

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, it has been argued why I reckon paid

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are wiser. Admittedly, the positive aspects of a free museum must be considered. There is no doubt that it attracts more

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to come because you do not need to pay.

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, I still believe

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paid

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have many ways enriched

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's lives.

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, one Indian artist, Lucy Blair, once said"When you pay the fee for the

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, you pay more attention to the detailed information of the displays. Definitely,

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about the culture."

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it is clearly shown that the benefits of

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paid

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are much better than

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.

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, another aspect that should be considered is the financial reason. As far as

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are concerned, the ultimate aim of

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is to run a long-term business.

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, a recent article published in Nelson Magazine revealed that

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absolutely need the fee of admission.

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, they have enough money to invest themselves better. Undoubtedly, it is a clear indication that the good sides of paid

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are more than

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bad sides.

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, I insist that the positive aspects of paid

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are more than their negative aspects given the reasons outlined above. In order to address

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issue, the government and

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should make a concerted effort to find a solution.