You are going to have a party. You would like to invite a friend who lives in a city that is a long way from your home. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: ▪️Explain why you are having the party ▪️Describe your plans for the party ▪️Suggest how your friend can travel to the party and where he / she can stay
Dear Jim,
I
hope
this
message finds you well. I am writing this
letter to invite you for
the Change preposition
to
party
which I am throwing next month.
Its
been ages Replace the word
It's
It is
we
Correct word choice
since we
have
met Unnecessary verb
apply
hence
, this
is the perfect time to see you soon. I am going to surprise you guess what, I am going to marry soon. Yes, you have heard right . I am organizing my bridal shower before some days of my marriage and you have to join that party
. Well
I know you are living far away from my city but I have already planned how you will join the Add the punctuation
Well,
party
. As well as
,
Remove the comma
apply
party
is on Add an article
the party
a party
last
weekend of October so, Correct article usage
the last
that is
also
fine for you to come. Earlier you mentioned that you have only work from Monday to Friday.All of our childhood friends are invited for
the Change preposition
to
party
, I hope
you will not miss this
opportunity to meet them all. One of my close relatives is coming from your city, if you want they can pick you from
your house. I am just making everything easy for you to come. I have arranged some games which you will play that day. Change preposition
up from
Moreover
for Add a comma
Moreover,
dinner
there are so many cuisines I have ordered from the famous Add a comma
dinner,
restaurant
Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
of
my city. I Change preposition
in
hope
you will accept my invitation.
Hope
you hear back soon.
Yours lovely,
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coherence cohesion
Make sure each paragraph contains a single idea to improve the clarity of your message.
task achievement
Incorporate more varied sentence structures and vocabulary to enhance the sophistication of your response.
task achievement
The letter contains all the necessary elements: explanation of the party, description of plans, and suggestions for travel and stay.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are both friendly and appropriate, setting a nice tone for the letter.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.