the chart below shows how frequently people in the usa ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013

the  chart below shows how frequently people in the usa ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013
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The bar chart illustrates how often American people eat in fast-chain restaurants for the years 2003 and 2013.
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, eating fast food as
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as once a week, once or twice a month is substantially the norm; meanwhile, eating out every day or never is less common. As
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can be seen from the graph, most Americans consume fast food once a week,
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habit remained popular for the period given; starting with slightly above 30% in 2003, followed by an increase
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until it dropped in 2013 by about 27%.
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, people eating once or twice a month had almost the same percentage in 2003, but it
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had the opposite trend compared to once a week for the following years.
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, both eating unhealthy food every day or never at all, made up the least proportion out of all the six consumption cycles. Both eating habits remain the same for the three years falling slightly just under 5%.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fast food consumption
  • Frequency
  • Dining trends
  • Demographic factors
  • Peak periods
  • Downward/upward trend
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Nutritional awareness
  • Economic impact
  • Health implications
  • Convenience foods
  • Eating habits
  • Statistical evidence
  • Year-over-year comparison
  • Fluctuation
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