The maps show the extension which took place at the seaside resort of Templeton from 1990 to 2005.
The maps show the extension which took place at the seaside resort of Templeton from 1990 to 2005.
Overall
, a comparison of the two maps presents a modification from a rural area to a mostly urban area.
According to
the maps,in 1990 seaside resort of Templeton was natural
,undeveloped Correct article usage
a natural
placewith
many trees,individual houses and public facilities Correct your spelling
place with
such
as Correct article usage
a hospital
hospital
,Fix the agreement mistake
hospitals
school
and railway Fix the agreement mistake
schools
station
,but during the next 15 Fix the agreement mistake
stations
years
the town accomplished significant changes. Add a comma
,years
Firstly
,the most appreciable is that all the trees cut
down and a new airport was built on the right side of the river.Add a missing verb
were cut
Furthermore
,the trees and houses located in the south-east
of the town were Correct your spelling
southeast
also
replaced by Add an article
the factory
factory
.
Another notable change was in the Fix the agreement mistake
factories
south-west
of the area,where a new big supermarket was built.Correct your spelling
southwest
Also
the houses were pulled down to make way for new apartment blocks. Add a comma
,Also
Moreover
,there was a significant change from railway
Add an article
the railway
a railway
station
Fix the agreement mistake
stations
in
Change preposition
to
coastline
.In 2005,using Add an article
the coastline
ferry
Correct article usage
a ferry
was
helped to Unnecessary verb
apply
transported
cars from west to east.Change the verb
transport
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