he maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005

he maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005
The maps illustrate the changes that have occurred at the seaside resort of Templeton from 1990 to 2005.
Overall
, the major changes were chopping down green areas and replacing them with a factory, supermarket, airport, and extended railway line.
First,
the trees were cleared and some small apartments were knocked down on the northwest
side
, and
instead
of them, multistory buildings were constructed. On the southwest
side
, it can be noticed that the
mansions
were changed by two multistory buildings, and just below them, the railway line was expanded. The flora which was between two roads from the left
side
of the river was removed to build the
mansions
. Just below them, the new supermarket was opened. The vegetation on the northwest
side
of the school
cut
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down for the construction airport.
Moreover
, from the northeast of the hospital, two new
mansions
were built. On the southeast, all flora and
mansions
were replaced by the factory, and a ferry just below the railway station was constructed.
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