The charts show the Australian school leavers did immediately after leaving secondary school.

The charts show the Australian school leavers did immediately after leaving secondary school.
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The pie graphs illustrate the Australian graduates of the
school
in
three
different years broken down into
three
activities.
Overall
, it is clear from the charts that half of the
school
leavers applied for higher education in 1980,
however
, employment after
school
graduation made up the highest proportion for the next two decades. Among the
three
categories, the number of unemployed graduates was the lowest at 10% in 1980, and after slight growth
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4% in 1990, it again fall to 8% in 2000. Higher education and employment were the most popular activities for
school
leavers in all
three
periods. Precisely, half of
school
leavers in Australia chose higher education as the next step, but it started moderately dropping for the next two decades and made up 38% and 37%, respectively. At the same time, employment became more popular among students, since starting at 40% in 1980, it remarkably increased to 55% in 2000.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words school, three with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • tertiary education
  • vocational training institutions
  • competitive job market
  • skilled professionals
  • workforce
  • practical work experience
  • employment opportunities
  • gap year
  • volunteer work
  • personal development
  • formal education
  • online courses
  • part-time studies
  • continuous learning
  • unemployment
  • career guidance
  • support services
  • informed decisions
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