The maps show the developments which have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.
The maps show the developments which have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.
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, a comparison of the two maps present significant changes from a largely rural to Correct your spelling
Overall
mainly
urban landscape.
In 1990, in the northern part of the Correct article usage
a mainly
seaside
there were a large number of residential Add a comma
,seaside
area
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areas
surrouded
by trees and individual houses, but during the next 15 Correct your spelling
surrounded
years
the town experienced a number of dramatic changes. The most noticeable is that all of the trees on the south and east sides were cut down, with all the houses along the railway line being knocked down and replaced by buildings and Add a comma
,years
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a factory
factory
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factories
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, with the lengthening of the railway length, a boat appeared, which is located on the southeastern part of the sea.
Another change is the appearance of a supermarket that is
located at the back of the buildings and we can also
see that an additional road appeared in front of the store, which was not in 1990.Submitted by dnm.best on
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