The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The bar graph compares
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earnings of a Correct article usage
the export
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the table data outlines the percentage change in Linking Words
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revenue
in 2016 than that of the previous Use synonyms
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, petroleum and engineered Linking Words
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earners for Use synonyms
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both in 2015 and 2016, and the Use synonyms
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amount increased in 2016 than the figure of previous years except for gems and Use synonyms
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commodities.
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country
earned approximately 220 Use synonyms
billion
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the next
year
. In 2015, Use synonyms
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earnings
export
was over 60 Use synonyms
billion
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, the second-highest. Next Use synonyms
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they made roughly 63 and 62 Use synonyms
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consisted of 70 Use synonyms
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in income
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textile goods secured around 27 Correct article usage
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billion
, which was the lowest. In 2016, the Use synonyms
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exported just over 30 Use synonyms
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dollar's textile and agro merchandises each, and nearly 40 Use synonyms
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dollar's Use synonyms
jewellery
.
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from which dropped by nearly 5%. Use synonyms
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, the Linking Words
export
of engineered goods soared by 8.5% Use synonyms
while
the highest increase was for textile Linking Words
products
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, it earned 3% and approximately 1% more from petroleum and agricultural Linking Words
merchandises
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merchandise
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in
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