Some people say that protecting the environment is the governments’ responsibility. others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it. Discuss Both views and give your opinion.
Today,some people believe that protecting the
environment
is the governments
Change to a genitive case
government's
governments'
responsibility
while
other people believe that every indiviual
should take Correct your spelling
individual
responsibility
for it.This
essay will show you discuss both views and give my opinions.I think that every individual ahould
take Correct your spelling
should
responsibility
for it.
On the one hand,there are some reasons that protecting the environment
has a so big effect
of
our thinking and Change preposition
on
action
because government
is Add an article
the government
chosing
by Correct your spelling
choosing
citizen
and Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
government
is top of Add an article
the government
country
.So,if Add an article
the country
government
say do not need
recycle,Add the particle
toneed
mabey
all the most Correct your spelling
maybe
citizen
are not doing recycle,and also
if government
do not use Add an article
the government
money
for Add an article
the money
environment
problems,Replace the word
environmental
sientist
can Correct your spelling
scientist
scientists
resharch
for Correct your spelling
research
solution
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the solution
of
Change preposition
to
Correct article usage
the environment
environment
problem.So our Replace the word
environmental
action
Add a missing verb
is dicide
dicide
by Correct your spelling
decided
government
action
.Secondly
,government
can big Add an article
the government
action
for Correct article usage
the environment
environment
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environmental
problem
,Fix the agreement mistake
problems
then
cooperate with other countries.
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and then
On the other hand
,there are several reason
that every Change to a plural noun
reasons
indivinal
Correct your spelling
individual
ahould
take Correct your spelling
should
responsibility
for protecting the environment
.The most main reason is that our actions are
Unnecessary verb
apply
effect
Correct your spelling
affect
to
Change preposition
by
environment
.Add an article
the environment
For example
,if government
say do
not Unnecessary verb
apply
use
Fix the infinitive
to use
plastic
bag ,but Add an article
a plastic
citizen
are using them.Do not save of
the Change preposition
apply
environment
.Government
is
often say that we should Unnecessary verb
apply
to
Change the verb form
apply
action
for the environment
,so individual action
is the most effect
Replace the word
effective
for
Change preposition
on
environment
.Add an article
the environment
Secondly
,we can easily action
to Replace the word
act
environment
.Add an article
the environment
Such
as,
using Remove the comma
apply
eco
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an eco
the eco
bag
and so on.There are people more than 36 million in Fix the agreement mistake
bags
earth
,so if every one Add an article
the earth
action
to
Change preposition
on to
envirinment
,very good Correct your spelling
environment
effect
on earth
.
In conclusion,Add an article
the earth
government
has Add an article
the government
effect
Correct article usage
an effect
for
Change preposition
on
Add an article
a citizen
citizen
Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
while
citizen
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the citizen
effect
on Correct your spelling
affect
Add an article
the earth
earth
.So,I think that every individual should take Correct your spelling
Earth
responsibility
for protecting the environment
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