Some people believe that nowadays we have to many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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globalization era, plenty of

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debateable

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debatable

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one side, there

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some people who believe that statement,

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others

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don't

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essay will discuss why I agree that we

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, as a modern society, have

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many

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. The first and main evidence of having plenty

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choices

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is the huge number of advertisement that leads to distraction. It is available

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in

differents

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different

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app

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in

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our phones.

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, when we are searching

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watch

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our phone. It shows not only in

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google

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app, but it's spreading to youtube, shopping

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, and even

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. On top of that, we can't control all the incoming offers.

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, proofing

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a huge number

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choices

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and

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risk

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being distractions. The second evidence of having plenty

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choices

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is that we are faced with enough unnecessary

choices

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from time to time.

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, students now have over one thousand

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accessories.

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as rubber, marker, and sticky notes.

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, those are not

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crucial

things to decide. But because we have

to

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many

platform

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for

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advertisement

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we are forced to pick one.

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, it is appropriate to say that nowadays we have beyond

neccesary

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necessary

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. In conclusion, I strongly agree that all of us have

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many options.

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to that those options

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from benefiting to risking us.