Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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cars
and motorbikes is considered Use synonyms
as
the best approach to improve Change preposition
apply
road
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safety
by some Use synonyms
people
. I think having younger drivers on the Use synonyms
roads
does not Use synonyms
cause
serious problems since they do not Use synonyms
drive
recklessly as Use synonyms
adults
, so I disagree with the given opinion.
Youngsters driving Use synonyms
cars
can be seen as dangerous but they actually Use synonyms
drive
safer than Use synonyms
adults
. To be more specific, young Use synonyms
people
are more healthy, physically and mentally so they perform better on the kind of tasks like driving. So In my opinion, making driving inaccessible for them cannot improve Use synonyms
road
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safety
but Use synonyms
do
not even have an impact.
When it comes to Correct subject-verb agreement
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adults
, they are the Use synonyms
cause
of the majority of Use synonyms
accidents
on Use synonyms
roads
. Use synonyms
Adults
can drink, smoke and do many unhealthy things so their bodies Use synonyms
as well as
their mental health are mostly not stable. So, they may Linking Words
cause
more problems than younger Use synonyms
people
on the Use synonyms
roads
. Use synonyms
For example
, all the Linking Words
accidents
I've witnessed are committed by Use synonyms
adults
and never seen any younger even crash a car into another one. So, personally, having Use synonyms
adults
on the Use synonyms
roads
is dangerous so we do not have to worry about having teenagers Use synonyms
drive
Use synonyms
cars
.
As far as I am concerned, I believe regular Use synonyms
road
maintenance and enforced speed limits can improve Use synonyms
the
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road
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safety
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than
just increasing the minimum legal age for driving. Many Correct quantifier usage
more than
roads
do not meet the Use synonyms
safety
requirements so repairing them should be the obvious way to improve Use synonyms
safety
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as well as
to prevent fatal Linking Words
accidents
speed limits should be enforced in more places. Use synonyms
Therefore
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road
Use synonyms
safety
can be achieved.
In conclusion, I do not think increasing the minimum age for driving Use synonyms
cars
improves Use synonyms
road
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safety
, because teenagers do not Use synonyms
drive
unsafely as many Use synonyms
people
think, Use synonyms
adults
actually Use synonyms
cause
many more Use synonyms
accidents
than youngsters so Use synonyms
instead
maintaining Linking Words
roads
regularly and enforcing speed limits in more places can be the best approach to improve the Use synonyms
safety
in Use synonyms
roads
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