Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Increasing the minimum permissible age for driving

cars

and motorbikes is considered

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the best approach to improve

road

safety

by some

people

. I think having younger drivers on the

roads

does not

cause

serious problems since they do not

drive

recklessly as

adults

, so I disagree with the given opinion. Youngsters driving

cars

can be seen as dangerous but they actually

drive

safer than

adults

. To be more specific, young

people

are more healthy, physically and mentally so they perform better on the kind of tasks like driving. So In my opinion, making driving inaccessible for them cannot improve

road

safety

but

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does

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not even have an impact. When it comes to

adults

, they are the

cause

of the majority of

accidents

roads

Adults

can drink, smoke and do many unhealthy things so their bodies

as well as

their mental health are mostly not stable. So, they may

cause

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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