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Is online learning as good as face-to-face learning?

Online learning might be good as face-to-face learning. It thoroughly depends on the situation whether it is the time of corona outburst. Epidemic requires online
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 to avoid socializing. Online
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 help
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 in many a way , People who live in remote areas can get advanced education by staying at their homes reducing their many expenses like travelling and hostelling. At the time of corona epidemic , online
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 were highly appreciated by most institutes. Providing homework online can ease
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' completing their assignments and submitting them online.
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 avoids socializing , so without ,interaction there are fewer
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 of the spread of disease. Nowadays many online platforms for online are
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 available which
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 give you certifications.
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 medium of learning helps
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 to learn online if somehow they missed attending their physical
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. Sometimes teachers provide you with difficult tasks to complete, in that case, you can take help from the community
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, There are replications of studying online. Without putting in their own effort ,
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 can purchase assignments on different platforms and not even try them themselves resulting in less grooming of their minds.
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 Face-to-face learning gives more confidence to
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 , they can ask many times if they are not understanding the concepts accurately. It is not the same in the scenario if someone is taking an online course. ,
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 are aware of
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 either who are putting their all effort to learn the syllabus. Physical appearance in quizzes and assignments evaluate better. The classroom environment gives extra confidence to pupils. They prepare themselves for interviews that way. Physical
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 make
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 more time-bound they learn time management. In the end, I believe in face-to-face learning is better. There are more
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 of learning
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 there are
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 that if you are studying online you have more
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 of cheating.
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, it will not be the case if we are physically present there.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bilingual
  • multilingual
  • fluency
  • communicate
  • cognitive skills
  • cultural awareness
  • opportunities
  • globalized world
  • job market
  • interact
  • linguistic abilities
  • cultural exchange
  • language proficiency
  • language barrier
  • foreign travel
  • personal growth
  • academic achievement
  • self-confidence
  • enhance
  • cross-cultural communication
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