Some people think that development in technology causes environmental problems. Other people believe that technology can solve environmental problems. Discuss both sides of the argument and then give your opinion
In the modern world , environmental issues related to modern
technology
has
become a major concern for many countries. Some assume that going back to the old traditions can be a better solution for alleviating Correct subject-verb agreement
have
the
environmental problems . Correct article usage
apply
However
, others think that utilising the help of technology
can be solved these crisis
. Change the determiner
this crisis
these crises
This
essay will discuss both views . I ,however
, stand with the latter view.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why some individuals'
think that leading a simple life can mitigate environmental deterioration . Change noun form
individuals
Firstly
, in the modern era , the issues related to nature is
surging Correct subject-verb agreement
are
due to
pollution from different sources like increasing
Correct article usage
the increasing
use
of fossil fuels or clearing the Correct article usage
the use
forest
areas. To elaborate, in the past we can see that Change preposition
of forest
the
issue like those were limited because most Correct article usage
apply
the
people around the world Correct article usage
apply
has
unluxurious life. Change the verb form
have
However
, today , most individuals '
are using private vehicles like cars and two-wheelers for easy commuting . But , the increasing consumption of natural resources in vehicles has been rising the level of carbon dioxide in Change noun form
individuals
air
, and eventually , owing to environmental issues like global warming and so on . Add an article
the air
Therefore
, if individuals
go back to old cultures like using bicycles for transportation can help to protect the
nature from destruction . Correct article usage
apply
Consequently
, it can also
assist the
people to improve their health , by cycling.
Correct article usage
apply
On the other hand
, technology
can be a
important asset for reducing environmental destruction . First of all, researchers can develop so many schemes that are quite eco - friendly Change the article
an
such
as natural gas and electricity as a form of fuel for operating vehicles so that individuals
can commute comfortably without causing environmental problems. In addition
, we can see that most environmental
friendly companies today , are Change the adjective
environmentally
also
developing windmills and solar panels for producing electricity for households
purposes . Change the noun form
household
Hence
, it can crub
environmental problems like global warming or pollution from different sources. Correct your spelling
cause
Furthermore
, in
Change preposition
apply
most
Add an article
the most
a most
house
their now biogas plants for storing waste materials , so that they can convert those waste products to different forms like gas for cooking or use as a fertilizer for agricultural usage.
Fix the agreement mistake
houses
To conclude
, it is obvious that modern technology
has caused so many
environmental Correct quantifier usage
much
deterioration
nowadays. Change to a plural noun
deteriorations
However
, l believe that rather than going back to a simper
life ; we can utilise Correct your spelling
simpler
the
Correct article usage
apply
technology
for protecting the
nature.Correct article usage
apply
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