Some people believe that giving aid to poorer countries has more negative effects than positive effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree? .

Poverty is a worldwide problem .In
this
modern ,world there are many
nations
that require help from other countries which would help the poorer
nations
to improve. I
,
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believe it has more advantages than disadvantages.
To begin
,many countries lack resources to improve the well-being of their
people
.
As a result
of which there occur many deaths and the economy
also
falls down.
For example
, in Iran where individuals face difficulty in sending their children to educational institutions
due to
low sources of income and a lack of schools and colleges.It's the responsibility of other
nations
to provide financial help to their government in constructing good infrastructure to educate children.By doing so they can brighten the future of many pupils and as a ,result the literacy rate will
also
go up.
Secondly
,by giving a helping hand we can help the country to boost its economy as the economy rises more job opportunities will be available to the
people
.Individuals are migrating to other
nations
due to
a lack of employment in their state and moving away from their families.
For instance
, it has been reported in a recent article that the number of international immigrants is from India because in India there is a scarcity of work and
people
are not paid huge salaries since it does not have its budget.
To conclude
,by bridging the gap between the rich and poor we can increase the literacy rate in poorer countries and increase the employment vacancies and
people
don't have to move to other
nations
and live happily with their families.
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