THE PIE CHART SHOW THE REASONS PEOPLE IN GREAT BRITIAN HAD FOR VISITING ART MUSEUMS IN THE YEARS 1990 and 2000
The two pie charts display the
reasons
why tourists from England visited art museums
in 1990 and 2000.
Overall
, both charts reveal that the primary motive behind visiting museums
was to gain knowledge and learn something new. In contrast
, the least popular reason
was to appreciate art pieces. However
, there was a difference in the second most common reason
for visiting museums
between the two years. In 1990, the second purpose was to schedule free time, whereas
, in 2000, it was to attend unique exhibitions.
To provide a more detailed analysis, obtaining knowledge was the most significant factor in attracting people to museums
, accounting for approximately 45% of the reasons
in both years. In 1990, the second most common reason
was to fill their schedules, with a percentage of 27%, but it fell to fifth place in 2000, with only 12% of visitors citing it as their reason
for visiting.
In both years, spending time with friends and family and participating in special events were equally popular, accounting for 12% of the reasons
in 1990. However
, in 2000, there was a significant increase in the number of visitors who preferred participating in special events, accounting for about 18% of the reasons
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