Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

The
fashion
industry continues to bombard society with a non-stop stream of powerful imagery, colours, sounds and styles, in order to extort money from us. Keeping up with the latest trends may feel like a constant task, and what may be fashionable
one
minute may be out of style the next.
However
,
this
does not stop
people
from buying and wearing new and expensive items of clothing or jewellery in the pursuit of style, even if it is potentially to their detriment.
This
essay discusses why
people
strive to wear fashionable clothing, and why the pursuit of
fashion
may not always be a positive force in
people
's lives. Humans are inherently social creatures, and it has often been recognised that
people
are able to feel included if they are wearing clothes that are currently in
fashion
. For inclusion in certain socio-economic groups, wearing the 'appropriate' brands guarantees a sense of belonging and may act as a gatekeeper to membership within that group. With
this
in mind, it would be sensible to assume that* there may be strong psychological factors underlying a person's choice of clothing that may have little to do with the actual garments.
However
, as a corollary,
people
's behaviour may be strongly influenced by the perceived threat of social exclusion if
one
does not conform to accepted notions of
fashion
. In fact,
one
might assume that the endless cycle of purchasing new and expensive clothes in order to remain 'fashionable' might be detrimental both to a person's bank balance
as well as
their sense of self, if
such
behaviour is driven mainly by the fear of becoming a social outcast.
Such
behaviour is well attested in studies on* teenage girls
in particular
, for whom inclusion within a social structure is paramount to their developing sense of identity and self.
This
can cause a great deal of stress for parents who are not able to afford the latest trends and brands demanded by their children.
To sum up
,
one
might conclude that the pursuit of
fashion
may well impact negatively on society as a whole, particularly if
one
has to manage to stay in
fashion
while
on a budget. It would be preferable if
fashion
companies could promote trends that are more accessible to the wider population who may not have the time or resources to keep up with the latest trend.
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