Crime is a big problem in the world; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

The rate of committing a

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is increasing significantly in the whole world,

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, It is believed that

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has become a major

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and believers of

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statement say that no measure can be taken to reduce the

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rate in the world. I strongly disagree with the given statement. In the upcoming paragraphs, I shall highlight some solutions to eliminate

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issue. First of all, let's begin by talking about the major cause of the violation, which is Poverty. In the world, there are so many communities that are suffering from having very low income, which as a result unable to fill basic necessities,

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as food, shelter and clothes. When poor people are unable to feed their kids, they start committing

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, for ,example mini

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as pickpocketing, stealing and stanching electronic devices. which

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turn into major

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as looting a bank, robbery and killing someone to get money. No doubt the

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is worse, but steps can be taken to address the issue. To address

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, Government should come ahead, authorities are the only person who can eliminate

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from the root. Officials should provide low-income families with basic necessities which include food, shelter and clothes.

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, they should start welfare housing programmes for people living in slum areas.

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way complications can be eliminated

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great extent. When the root cause of

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is addressed, there is nothing left for them to commit a

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. The second most obvious cause of

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is drugs. parents should keep an eye on their kids, from where they are getting money to buy expensive appliances and drugs. parents should be strict enough with their kids and should maximum time with them.

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but not least,

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should provide employment opportunities to individuals. so that

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of committing

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, they should get a job and earn by themselves. In conclusion,

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reiterate my position by saying that no doubt the

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is huge, but the joint efforts of both parents and the government can help to reduce

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great extent.