The pie charts Below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010
the two Pies chart gives information about the proportion of
household
expenditure
in six Major categories, hence
, from 1950 and 2010 in one country.
Overall
, initially
, the average household
expenditure
in 1950, had only one biggest slice was housing, while
other slice showed a steady average without the Food
Part, Whereas
, in 2010 the major category begin with food
then
housing and others have the same proportion.
as we see in these two pie charts, will begin with, Average household
expenditure
in the year 1950?
The large slice was housing had an average of 72.1 per Change the punctuation
.
cent
while
others , health care and transportation, were the same average between 2.4 and 4.4 per cent
, in contrast
, food
was the second category, had 11,2 per cent
and then
education at 6,6 proportion, comparatively with 2010, the average household
expenditure
, the highest piece was in food
34,0 per cent
, in addition
, Housing and other remains the same in the percentages, while
in transportation has 14 per cent
of users, in the end
the health care increased by 2 per Add the comma(s)
,end
cent
, compared with the year 1950, also
education remained constant in both years.Submitted by creativedesign1a9 on
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