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You are preparing an event in the countryside. Write a letter to your friend and ask for help with the arrangements. What the event is. Why the event is being held? What arrangements have already been made? How your friend can help?

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Dear Susan, How are you? I hope you're doing well. I'm glad to inform you that I'd be organizing an educational event for the underprivileged people in our nearby village. Since my childhood, I wanted to spread education awareness among the villagers and now getting big support from the local council.
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, as villagers lack knowledge and resources, it is our responsibility to educate them so that they can live a good life in future. Because I come from the same background, I'd
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 to help these people and other people helped me to learn and grow.
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, I'd like to make a difference in other's life.
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, I've arranged support from the local NGO which will ensure supplies of necessary materials
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 as stationary, boards and other materials.
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, I'd be needing some volunteers so that they can convince them that studies can change the future of their child and I know you are best at persuading the public. Needless to say, I am looking forward to your support. Regards, Vikas
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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