In many countries schools have severe problems with students behaviour.What are the causes and possile solutions for this problem.

The rebellious nature of
children
is always a concern in society.
school
encounter it most as students spend a major proportion of their time in institutes. it is happening owing to the negligence in parenting
coupled with
excessive freedom given to the
children
,
however
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it can be mitigated by taking rational steps by schools
as well as
parents.
to begin
with,
school
is the place where adequate behaviour is required to maintain an appropriate learning environment.
In
contrast
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students misbehave because of poor parenting by their families.
in other words
, learners ignore the disciplinary instructions as they do not have any sense of responsibility developed. apart from that in many nations,
due to
the family
structure
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children
have more relaxation to do whatever they want.
for instance
, in China owing to the single-child policy, parents pamper their
children
more than necessary and try to provide whatever they want. it will hamper their child's development of rational thinking. when they go to
school
they want the same what they get at home;
however
, the
school
has to cater to each and every student equally.
this
will become the cause of the disruption.
nevertheless
,
this
problem can be sorted out by involving parents in academy management and disciplinary committee. for ,example many countries like India, have a committee called SMC which ensures every juvenile gets proper care and follow a code of conduct. it provides a sense of alertness among
children
.
thus
, they perform better in an academic environment. Another prominent step is taking appropriate action against the scholar who breaks the norms issued by the
school
. To exemplify it if a student has the fear of punishment in their mind
then
the student tries to indulge less in
such
unwanted activities. in ,
addition
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it will provide an example for others as well.
to conclude
,
however
, students are causing
disturbence
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disturbance
disturbances
in
th
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the
schools provided by
that
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the excessive freedom and poor parenting. it can be
counterd
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countered
counted
by using appropriate steps
such
as giving punishment
whenver
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whenever
required and forming a committee.
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