The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.
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The given charts illustrate two different pieces of data. The upper one is about the number of overseas
visitors
in Australia from 1975 to 2005; the other shows the nationality of visitors
in Australia in 1975 and 2005.
Overall
, it is true that the numbers
of people from each country rose from 1975 to 2005. Fix the agreement mistake
number
Furthermore
, any category about where the visitors
came from did not surpass other categories over the given period.
Taking a closer look at both graphs, one can see that the number of people travelling to Australia surged from 8.8 million
in 1975 to 30.4 million
in 2005. In addition
, between 1985 and 1995, the total visitor numbers increased by almost 10 million
.
To be specific, visitors
from Japan had the largest number 3.2 million
in 1975 and soared to 12 million
in 2005. Moreover
, visitors
who came from Korea increased drastically from 2.9 million
in 1975 to 9.1 in 2005. On the other hand
, the figures for travellers from the USA and China were similar in 1975, 4000 thousand and 3000 thousand, respectively. Both of them also
approximately doubled to 1.1 million
and 8000 thousand in 2005, maintaining the lower ranks.Submitted by eunbi_0915 on
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