The diagram below shows the stages in processing cocoa beans.
The diagram illustrates the steps required for processing
cocoa
beans
.
Overall
, this
process is composed of three key steps, commencing with picking the cocoa
beans
and culminating in delivering finished commodities to consumers.
The first phrase involving whole beans
is selected during the picking process before being dried to extract their shell. Next,
those beans
are pressed to make cocoa
liquor, which then
experiences one of the two approaches, namely further
pressing or further
refining. In the former way, the liquor is continued to be pressed to make either cocoa
or cocoa
cake. Or else, this
alcohol is refined before it reaches the industrial chocolate stage, where sugar and cocoa
are combined.
The next step is
that, while
the cocoa
cake experiences a grinding step to make cocoa
powder to be marketed to customers, the cocoa
will be switched to the industry to make cakes and drinks. The finished chocolate products are manufactured from the final processing step of industrial chocolate before it is sold to the public.Submitted by dangtranquoctrung01 on
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