The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram gives information on the entire
sugar
production process from the starting point, namely the sugar
cane
, to the final product.
It is clear that
sugar
manufacturing comprises a total of seven steps. The main manufacturing stages begin once the sugar
cane
has grown and is ready for harvesting.
In order to make sugar
, firstly
the sugar
cane
needs to be planted and allowed to grow for 12 to 18 months. Then
people can harvest mature plants with the help of modern machines such
as tractors or some primitive tools like scythes.
The main process starts with the crushing of the sugar
cane
so that we can obtain the juice from it. Following
this
, the juice is purified with a limestone filter and then
taken into an evaporator. As the temperature continues to rise, the juice is turned into syrup. By using the technique of centrifuges, the sugar
crystals can be separated from the syrup. And when the crystals have been dried and cooled, we gain the final product, sugar
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