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People are using a lot of online language translation apps. Do the benefits of this outweighs the disadvantages?

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In today’s technological world, it is very common to use advanced gadgets, particularly in making communication. Regarding
this
, applications that are related to languages can be significantly noticeable
although
 there are some benefits and drawbacks with them and I tend to consider more on its disadvantages. On the one hand, cutting-edge equipment like smartphones and their apps have made our current lives far more convenient.
For example
, without the need to spend a lot of time and money on
language
 classes, you can use user-friendly software on your mobile phone to translate a foreign
language
 into your mother tongue.
Moreover
, you can have unlimited access to a variety of languages through the artificial intelligence of
such
 software.
On the other hand
, if you want to keep in touch in
this
 way, it wouldn’t be effective.
In other words
, having effective communication and knowledge about other cultures you have to learn their native languages.
Furthermore
, exposing yourself to a new
language
 can be an exhilarating experience. Indeed, for knowing a widely spoken
language
 like English which is used in many societies as the first or the second you have an exciting opportunity to acquire it and engage with a lot of users. In conclusion, despite the big advantage of state-of-the-art technology that has brought conveniences and caused a much easier and faster connection, it has a huge negative point that does not allow us to experience intimate and real communication.
Besides
,
such
 apps prevent having more fun with learning a new
language
.
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