The graph shows fast food consumption among men and women in 2015.

The graph shows fast food consumption among men and women in 2015.
The bar chart compares males and females
as well as
four
age
cohorts regarding how many
calories
they gained each day eating fast
food
in the year 2015.
Overall
,
it is clear that
by
age
, both genders consumed less amount of fast
food
, and
this
food
was more consumed by men in comparison to the opposite sex in general. The youngest
age
group, aged from 18 to 34, consumed the highest amount of
calories
on a daily basis. Males obtained more
calories
than females, at almost 18 and 16 % respectively. The middle-aged
age
bracket, who were between 35 and 64, showed a similar percentage of daily calorie intake. The figure for those who were above 35 years old was almost the same, at around 10 %.
Similarly
, people aged 50-64 took in fewer
calories
, with below 10 %. The retirees, who were above 65, were the least active fast
food
consumers. Both males and females ate almost the same number of
calories
a day, at more than 4 % and fewer than 4 % each.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • fast food consumption
  • men
  • women
  • 2015
  • compare
  • contrast
  • differences
  • reasons
  • solutions
  • excessive
  • address
  • issue
  • recap
  • final thought
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