The diagram illustrates the number of shops in the situation of close and open in one country from 2011 to 2018.
The main
trend
of shop closures is about a slit drop. The amount
of closed Change the quantifier
number
shops
went down from around 6,500 in 2011 to 5,000 in 2018. While
the years from 2012 to 2013 saw a rise in the number
of shops
to over 7,000 in 2013, which was followed by a little decline in 2014. After that, the trend
demonstrates a dramatic drop in the number
of shops
to 1,000. Therefore
, it rose again to approximately 5,000 in 2016. Then
there was a minimised fluctuation in the remaining two years of the period.
When it comes to the new shops
, it shows the same trend
as the former ones. The amount of shop openings dropped from about 8,500 in 2011 to 3,000 in 2018. The number
of shops
opened decreased dramatically from 2011 to 2012, then
rose again in the next two years to a little over 6,000. It then
reduced again to about 4000 in the year 2015. The number
remained unchanged in 2016 and it increased a little bit in 2017 and then
declined to 3,000 in 2018.
Overall
, the number
of shop closures and openings both witnessed a downward trend
. The number
of shops
closed was generally greater than the number
of shops
opened.
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