The bar chart compares the proportion of 4 divers transportations usage throughout the commuting to work in one of European city in 3 separate years 1960, 1980 and 2000. The unit is measured in the percentage.
The bar chart depicts the proportion in the percentage of four transport, namely
bus
, car, Use synonyms
bike
, and Use synonyms
foot
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usage
throughout the commuting to work in one of the European cities in three different years 1960,1980, and 2000.
In 1960 the Use synonyms
usage
of Use synonyms
foot
was highest at 34%, followed by Use synonyms
bike
at 26%, next was Use synonyms
bus
at 18% and the lowest in 1960 was the car at 6%. Twenty years later, in 1980, popular Use synonyms
transportation
was the Use synonyms
bus
at 26%, and Use synonyms
then
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cars
slightly decreased to 23% , next was Use synonyms
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bus
experiencing decreased to 20% and the unfamous at that Correct article usage
the bus
year
was Use synonyms
foot
at17%. In 2000, Use synonyms
cars
became 36% which was the highest than the other Use synonyms
transportation
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year
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cars
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bus
took second place at 16% and Use synonyms
then
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foot
at 11% and the Use synonyms
last
one was Linking Words
bike
at 6%.
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To sum up
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year
the Use synonyms
usage
of Use synonyms
transportation
experienced changed. Use synonyms
Cars
became the highest of used Use synonyms
transportation
in 2000, and bikes became the lowest Use synonyms
usage
. The Use synonyms
usage
of Use synonyms
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foot
increased in 1960, and Fix the agreement mistake
feet
cars
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bacame
unfamiliar. In 1980 Correct your spelling
became
bike
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instead
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foot
mode was not chosen.Use synonyms
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