The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture above illustrates city hospital maps in the years 2007 and 2010 focusing on roads for entering and exiting the hospital. They show the main building, three roads, and the location for transportation access. It has three major differences, namely the features of the car park and bus station and the additional roundabout at the crossroads.
First,
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the car park in 2007, whether it was for the staff or the public, was located in the same place,
while
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in 2010 it was separated. The old location was restricted for staff,
whereas
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the public parking area could be found at the east of the main building and connected directly to the ring road. The second modification was the bus station. In 2010 it was moved from the east to the southwest, next to the hospital road.
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, two regular crossroads at Hospital Street were modified into two large roundabouts. In general, we can summarise these maps by stating, that directions to the car park, bus station, and hospital's crossroad get updated.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • improvements
  • facilitate
  • congestion
  • junctions
  • streamline
  • traffic flow
  • reduce congestion
  • public transport
  • bus station
  • efficiency
  • accessibility
  • parking facilities
  • car park
  • designated
  • alleviate
  • issues
  • adequate space
  • enhancements
  • overall accessibility
  • traffic management
  • convenience
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