Too much money is spent in maintaining and repairing old buildings, some people think they should be knocked down and give way to modem building. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It's undeniably true that
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amount of money goes to
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and repair
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old buildings. That others would argue that
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of fixing it should be demolished and replaced with
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building. I partially agree, as I believe that it's impractical to keep old
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as
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is expensive and needs a lot of
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.
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giving way to new infrastructure will keep people safe,
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will boost the community. On
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hand,
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old buildings are considered part of
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to keep it good as it was, it needs delicate maintenance and repair which could be costly.
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, if it is not that significant it would be practical to tear it down and replace
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structure as
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will not only give
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image of the community,albeit it can save more money that could be used for other purposes.
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, keeping old building
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structure
is unsafe for
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. In Jordan,
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, decades ago the building collapsed during the wedding reception as it was not able to withstand the
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weight
of the people in the reception hall.
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, I believe that there are things to consider in before knocking down an old building,
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history
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and
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in
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society. Since building structure
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an important role in identifying
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's culture.
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in Ilocos
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province
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, their houses and street building are built during the
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colonial, breaking it down would mean removing a part of
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's culture,
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, and economy, as
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also
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became
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most
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visit
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place as it
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many
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both local and abroad. In conclusion, I would argue that to keep an old building is expensive and impractical,
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however
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some points
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to consider since some old
building
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buildings
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have
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had a significant share of our
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that often attracts
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tourists
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around the globe that help boost
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the country's
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socio-economic.
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,
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I acknowledge the risk to the people as it is not safe to stay in old buildings since physical
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structures
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are weaken
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are weakened
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by
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time.
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