The chart below shows changes in three different areas of crime in manchester city centre from 2003 to 2012.

The line graph compares and contrasts different variations in crimes

such

as

burglary

,

car

theft

, and robbery in Manchester City , over a 10-

year

time period from 2003 to 2012.

Overall

,

burglary

had the highest crime rates in the initial

year

.

However

, after 9 years it had a considerable fall in their rating .

Whereas

,

car

theft

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more popularity over the years. To be more specific, around 3,400 cases were reported as burglaries in Manchester City in 2003.

While

for

car

theft

and stealing ; it only recorded approximately 2,400 and 600 cases respectively. After a

year

,

burglary

accounted

a

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slight increase in their rating and reached

peak

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of 3,800 in 2004 . After that , it reported a significant drop in the ratio and

maded

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made

up to nearly 1000 in 2008 , their after it remained stable and reached 1,400 in the

last

year

. Meanwhile,

car

theft

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a constant trend until 2005 , and constituted 2000 in 2006. Moving forward , it recorded a dramatic surge in

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popularity and surpassed

burglary

in 2007 and reached a peak of 2,400 in 2012 .

Whereas

, robbery only accounted for 600 cases in the initial

year

and after ,that it had a slight rise in their rating and reached 700 in 2005 , and ,afterwards it remained stable and comprised almost 600 in 2012.