Universities should provide students with the skills they will require in order to succeed at their future jobs. How far do you agree ar disagree with the above opinion?

Some individuals believe that universities have to offer
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students
some opportunities to gain
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their
abilities for their
future
occupations. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with
this
idea because
students
might have not determined their
future
yet and they can learn
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practical
skills
outside of
college
.
To begin
with, many university
students
have not decided what they want to be in the
future
because they are still not familiar with what occupation is suitable
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.
Therefore
, it is difficult to gain a certain skill during
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time
for
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increasing the ability might become wasteful.
For instance
, there were many practical classes that I could take when I was
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student but I realized that all those classes were not
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necessary
for me when I look for a
job
.
Moreover
, if the
students
have an ideal occupation in the
future
already, there are tons of
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where they can learn the
skills
that help for their
future
job
. Since it is not all
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students
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know their ideal occupation at that moment, it is not
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necessary
that universities
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the
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students
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classes where they can study their practical
skills
.
For example
, if a student wants to be an
acountant
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accountant
, they can learn
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specific
skills
in
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school outside of
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college
while
they are studying academic subjects
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the university. In conclusion, personally, I strongly disagree with the opinion that
college
offer
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students
the opportunity for learning
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practical
skills
to
success
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their
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future
job
because many people are still looking for their ideal
job
and there
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institution
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where they can learn
the
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practical
skills
outside of colleges.
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